I'm still unsure about that faded quasi-frame behind him: it adds to the composition but it clutters up the page a lot. So...leave it white? Fiddle?
Also Vera wanted me to nix/lighten the outlines of the shadows in the face, but because I'm dumb and Photoshop hates me, this won't happen. Curses.
I'm going to clean up the little color layer overlaps still, so pardon if it's a tad messy around the edges. :)