Matt (mattbayne) wrote in limnastics,
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KotS page 24 in progress

ahhhh... the tribulations of layout and dialogue...



Help needed, specifically with posing for Scar's left leg in the last two panels. Hell, with everything in the last two panels. And see that empty word ballooon in panel 2? That's where the god aweful clichee was. Niamh was saying, "It'll all be over soon." So hackneyed it'd be like typing dialogue with a hatchet. She's talking to the man with the knife in the back of his skull, saying something that's ~suppossed~ to be comforting, but is actually a little ominous and/or disturbing. Suggestions for that are more than welcome.

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